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IELTS WRITING ESSAY || APRIL 2021 || SOLVED ESSAY NO - 81 || IELTSDK GLOBAL ||

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.


What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?






INTRODUCTION


Do not think that your life will always be hustle-free, success would not be delivered to you on a plate. A truly significant part of society bestows knowledge to their kids that if they exert they can seize anything in their life. This essay will discuss its two leading merits as humongous vital inspiration and scrutinizing some rare things by them while its two key drawbacks are neglecting tremendously fruitful aspects of life and squandering time by having massive stress.


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What are the brighter sides of endowing them this fact they can do anything through hard work? First and foremost is that they will get outrageously crucial motivation from them. Such as, if progenitors stimulate them to do hustle and encounter topsy-turvy times. Then it is highly likely to make them transformational. The second chief benefit is they will analyze some unique commodities. Exampli gratia, in my relatives, there is a girl named Dr. Ranjit Singh. She has also got marvelous support from her parents. As a result, she is the mere girl who is tech-savvy as she has burnt the midnight oil and relinquished hitting the sack.


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How does this facet have negative points as well? Initially, they will overlook worthwhile features of life. Such as, when a teenager engages himself in day and night effortfully engages himself in day and night effortful work, he does not savor other joyful and pleasant situations of life. Second, salient demerit of it as wasting time-span in excruciating stress. To epitomize, in my neighborhood, a boy did a ton of hard work to become an I.P.S officer. As a consequence of thinking immensely and encountering turbulent times, he has now become a daunting patient of depression.


CONCLUSION

In the light of this evidence, this essay has discussed its two principal advantage as b\never-evaporating inspiration besides accomplishing quickly things whereas its two pivotal disadvantages are refrain astonishing moments and having staggering stress.


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