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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 || ESSAY || SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ALLOWING CHILDREN TO MAKE THEIR OWN CHOICES ON EVERYDAY MATTERS SUCH A FRUIT COURSE CLOTHES AND ENTERTAINMENT IS LIKELY TO RESULT IN SOCIETY OF INDIVIDUALS WHO ONLY THING ABOUT THEIR OWN WISHES OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO MAKE DECISIONS ABOUT THE ABOUT MATTERS THAT AFFECT THEM? DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION || MARCH 2021



INTRODUCTION

A PORTION OF SOCIETY OF  OPINE THAT LETTING CHILDREN TO TAKE THEIR  PERSONAL DECISIONS REGARDING DAY TO DAY SUBJECTS; FOR EXAMPLE FOOD, APPARELS AND RECREATIONAL GENERALLY CREATES A COMMUNITY WHO ONLY THINKS IN SELFISH TERMS SINCE THEY ARE THOUGHT THEY ARE TAUGHT TO IGNORE OTHER PEOPLE'S COMFORT AND THINKING, WHILE OTHER SECTION OF PEOPLE CONSIDER THAT IT IS VITAL FOR KIDS TO MAKE DECISIONS ABOUT THINGS THAT ARE RELATED TO THEM BECAUSE IT WILL INSTALL A CONSIDERABLE CONFIDENCE IN THEM EVENTUALLY I WILL SHARE MY OPINION AS WELL.



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BY GIVING PERMISSION TO CHILDREN TO FOLLOW THEIR TASTE CALLINGS AND WISHES LET THEM TO BE SELF OBSESSED SINCE THEIR NEWEST SINCE THEY NEGLECT ABOUT PEOPLE PEOPLE WHO ARE AROUND WHAT THEY THINK? WHAT THEY LIKE? WHAT DO THEY CONSIDER COMFORTABLE? SUCH AS, A RESOURCE IT MADE UP OF CHILDREN BASED ON BUYING AND USING THINGS THAT ONLY FULFILS THEM WITHOUT FOCUSING A CARRIER BENEFIT IS THE CONSEQUENCE OF SUCH PARADIGM. FOR EXAMPLE, IF A CHILD IS ONLY OBSESSED WHAT FOOD HE LIKES WHICH CLOTHES MAKE HIM FEEL BETTER AND WHICH RECREATION SUITS HIS HEART,   THAT CHILD WILL FIND IT DIFFICULT TO FORM A MUTUALLY COOPERATIVE SOCIETY.
THUS EDUCATING CHILDREN IN THIS WAY A COULD POSE A THREAT TO EXISTENCE OF SOCIETY.



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WHY IS IT IMPORTANT TO TAKE THEIR DECISIONS BY CHILDREN ON MATTERS THAT ARE EXACTLY RELATED TO THEM SINCE IT MAKES THEM FEEL SELF-RELIANT IN LONG RUN. SUCH AS, DECISIONS RELATED TO WHAT TO WEAR, WHAT TO RESPOND IN A SITUATION, HOW TO SPEND THEIR LEISURE TIME, WHAT THEY INTUITIVELY FEEL IN A SITUATION, WHAT KIND OF CAREER EXPERIMENTATION THEY WANT TO EXPERIENCE AND HOW TO LOOK AT A SITUATION ARE CERTAIN THINGS THAT VERY MUCH PERSONALLY CONNECT TO THE CHILDREN. FOR EXAMPLE, I HAVE BEEN GIVEN ADEQUATE FREEDOM BY MY FAMILY TO STEP INTO THE DECISION MAKING ON MATTERS RELATED TO MY ABSOLUTE PERSONAL ZONE.` THUS HELPING CHILDREN INSTALL A STRONG SENSE OF PERSONAL CONFIDENCE BY GIVING THEM ACCESS TO A FIELD WHERE THEY TAKE THEIR OWN DECISIONS IS JUSTIFIED APPROACH.



CONCLUSION

THIS ESSAY HAS DISCUSSED BY A BRANCH OF PEOPLE ADVOCATE THE IDEA OF CHILDREN ARE GIVING LABORATORY LIABILITY TO TAKE DECISIONS FOR THEIR FOOD CLOTH AND ENTERTAINMENT THEY WILL BECOME MEAN SINCE IT WILL BLIND THEM FROM THINKING ABOUT OTHERS LIVES DIAL LIKES DISLIKES AND COMFORT WHERE AS THIS ESSAY HAS ALSO DISCUSS WHY GIVING THE POWER TO CHILDREN TO TAKE THEIR DECISIONS ABOUT THEIR PERSONAL MATTERS IS ESSENTIAL AS IT INCLUDES INCLUDE RELATES THE SPIRITS OF COURAGE INTO THEM I PERSONALLY OPEN MAKING CHILDREN CAN CONFIDENT BRAVE AND INTERNALLY STRONG IS EQUALLY COMMENDABLE AS TEACHING THEM ABOUT THINKING ALSO FOR OTHER PEOPLE CONVENIENCE AND PERSONAL CHOICES THANK YOU

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