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IELTS WRITING PART 2 || ESSAY || SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT HISTORY IS THE MOST IMPORTANT SCHOOL SUBJECTS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT IN TODAY’S WORLD SUBJECTS LIKE SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY ARE MORE IMPORTANT THAN HISTORY.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION. || APRIL 2021



INTRODUCTION

PEOPLE HOLD A DIVERSITY OF OPINIONS ON THE MATTER OF THAT WHICH ONE IS MORE 
IMPORTANT AS A SCHOOL SUBJECT, TEACHING HISTORY OR SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY.  THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY A LEAGUE OF PEOPLE ADVOCATE WHY HISTORY HOLDS A  KEY ROLE FOR STUDENTS AS IT INTRODUCES THEM WITH CONTINUOUS EVOLUTION OF  MANKIND SINCE ITS INCEPTION WHEREAS IT WILL ALSO DISCUSS WHY REST OF INDIVIDUALS RAISE THEIR VOICE IN SUPPORT OF ROLE OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY FOR STUDENTS SINCE TODAY’S ERA IS A TECHNOLOGY DRIVEN ERA WHERE KNOWLEDGE OF SCIENCE IS REALLY CRUCIAL. EVENTUALLY, I WILL GIVE MY OPINION ALSO.  


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WHY THE IDEA THAT HISTORY POSSESS A PIVOTAL WORTH IN CASE OF STUDENTS AS A SUBJECT SINCE THROUGH HISTORY, PUPILS GET TO KNOW ABOUT HOW LONG THEIR ANCESTORS HAVE COME FROM THE DAY ONE OF HUMAN EXISTENCE. WITH THIS 
SUBJECT ONLY, ONE GETS TO KNOW THAT HOW PROGRESSIVE HUMAN JOURNEY HAS 
BEEN UP TO THIS MOMENT. FOR EXAMPLE, IT IS THE SUBJECT THAT TOLD ME AS A 
SCHOOL STUDENT ABOUT VARIOUS CIVILISATIONS OF THE PAST AND HOW DID THEY DEVELOP THEMSELVES. CERTAINLY, IT GIVES AN EDGE TO PUPILS ABOUT HOW STRONG IS A HUMAN SPECIES IN ADAPTATION AND SURVIVAL. THUS, HISTORY AS A SUBJECT 
HOLDS A VITAL SIGNIFICANCE. 


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ONE THE OTHER HAND, WHY A PART OF SOCIETY SUPPORT THE IDEA THAT SCIENCE AND  TECHNOLOGY ARE MORE USEFUL TO STUDENTS AS PRESENTLY EVERY SMALL TASK THAT HUMAN BEINGS PERFORM IN DAY TO DAY LIFE IS BEING DONE WITH HELP OF TECHNOLOGY. SUCH AS, BUYING GROCERIES, HIRING A ROOM, RENTING A CAR AND SELLING SOMETHING TO OTHERS, THESE WERE THE TASKS THAT WERE DONE MANUALLY OR PERSONALLY BEFORE A DECADE AGO. AT PRESENT, UBER AND AMAZON ARE SHAPING HUMAN EXISTENCE IN AN UNPRECEDENTED WAY AS FAR AS BUYING GROCERIES AND RENTING A CAR ARE CONCERNED. IF MODERN STUDENTS ARE EDUCATED TO HARNESS THE TECHNOLOGICAL ASPECT, THEY CAN CERTAINLY RISE UP TO NEW HEIGHTS IN THEIR CAREERS. THUS, SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY OBVIOUSLY EMBODY A BETTER PROSPECT FOR PUPILS.


CONCLUSION

THIS ESSAY HAS DISCUSSED HOW TEACHING HISTORY MAKES STUDENT AWARE OF THE FACTOR OF CONSISTENT HUMAN EVOLUTION, HENCE IT IS CRUCIAL AS A SUBJECT WHILE IT HAS ALSO DISCUSSED THAT SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY CAN UNLOCK DOORS OF 
OPPORTUNITY AND GROWTH FOR MODERN STUDENTS AS THEY ARE THE NEED OF THE 
DAY. WHEREAS I PERSONALLY THINK THAT SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY ARE FAR MORE 
IMPORTANT TO TEACH STUDENTS AS WITH THIS, THEY CAN RUB THEIR SHOULDERS WITH 21ST CENTURY PROFESSIONALS AND GIVE THEIR BEST CONTRIBUTION IN HUMAN 
PROGRESS, WHILE HISTORY SHOULD BE SHARED TO THEM VIA MUSEUMS AND MOVIES.

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