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IELTS WRITING ESSAY || JUNE 2021 || SOLVED ESSAY NO - 132 || IELTSDK GLOBAL ||

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.

Why do you think that is the case?

What is the most important thing to succeed in life?


INTRODUCTION

Success is the ultimate agenda for all humans, but what factors contribute to success? Few personages fail in academia, however reach their breakthrough point easily. The reason is more emphasis on curriculum, grades and less on individual engrossments. What actually prominent is following their particular interests than academic syllabi as perceived by many moguls in the past such as Newton, Bill Gates.

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Academic institutions set norms for acknowledging pupils by their acquired scores, whether they are extraordinary, average, or underprivileged. But are not assisted in ameliorating their knacks nor are encouraged to follow their dreams rather conundrum seems to be God’s rule for the educators. For instance, if a peer is more intrigued in painting then he/she would be instigated to give up their whims and emphasize the more shortsighted endeavor, namely Science, Mathematics, and more. Moreover, the curriculum taught at academic institutions is far from being practical which is the actual thing that academic means.



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What really cardinal is to pursue innate and prominent engrossments for a mortal. Since a degree does not define a person rather their strength and ability do. Exempli gratia, folks namely Newton, Einstein, Bill Gates, and many more failed in academic studies and dropped out of school to pursue their dreams. And their efforts also pai9d them as they turned out to be more productive and civilized in their life and achieved humongous success.  They became benevolent scientists and business moguls set out to be great examples for the youngsters.

CONCLUSION

In cessation, failure in school and college studies do not entail the real abilities of human beings, however, what matters is success or failure in the real world, where academic studies do not even stand a chance in front of challenges and obstacles. Thus, pursue your passion and strengthen your skills and yourself to concur with any challenge that is thrown in front of you to achieve ultimate success. 


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