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IELTS WRITING ESSAY || MAY 2021 || SOLVED ESSAY NO - 127 || IELTSDK GLOBAL ||

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete while others believe that children learn teamwork.


Discuss both views and give your opinion.



                                     


INTRODUCTION



What are the physical activities school children to compete or collaborate a truly significant portion of society holds a diversity of opinions. This essay will discuss why a troop of mortals emphasizes that sports upskill them to compete as they grasp the skill to fight against others whereas why another section of society espouses that it renders them humongously vital power of teamwork as they learn leadership skills with harmony.


BODY PARAGRAPH - 1


Why a spectrum of society prioritize that non-academic pursuits like games educate them how to be a competent person as they learned to dwarf others. Such as in some sports they fight to be the best version of themselves besides excelling beyond others. To epitomize, during sports competition in my 10th grade, I learned to compete and outstripping other students and achieving the first rank. As a result, I caught the knowledge of fighting with others in the race of life. Thus, from this, it is crystal clear that sports bestow the command of competing.





BODY PARAGRAPH - 2


Why a bunch of personages espouses that it instructs them to get together with one another Such as, through games the grab leadership skills and learn to have sympathy and compassion towards others. Exampli gratia, my brother has been a member of a football team for two years now, as a result, he has apprehended to co-operate with others regardless of their background. From this fons-et-origo, it is explicit to be said that sports endow knowledge of teaming up.


CONCLUSION


In the light of this evidence, this essay has discussed why one section of society reckons that sport schools children to compete as they play against each other. However, why a flock of homo-sapiens advocate that it illuminates them to work in a team as they seize the understanding of solidarity. I personally believe that sports teach them to unite as a TEAM means Together Everyone Achieves More.


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