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IELTS WRITING ESSAY || MAY 2021 || SOLVED ESSAY NO - 106 || IELTSDK GLOBAL ||

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?



INTRODUCTION

Every coin has two facets. As far as proper controlling of crimes is concerned, there are several factors that matter most. Likewise, the criminal’s background, the magnitude of the crime, the social effect of crime, damage to the victim, intentions of the criminal, impression of law, and order of the area are the genuine factors that contribute a lot. In the coming stanzas, I will explicate both sides of the concerned matter.

BODY PARAGRAPH - 1

Certainly, a penalty of capital punishment is a must if the crime really does impact the mindset of the masses badly. In that situation, it becomes urgent to leave an impression for others as well that such things will not be tolerable in the future. Because, the law is there to empower the nation, to strengthen the faith of its citizens in the system, and to safely serve the nation. It must be very clear that if the severity of a crime is at its peak then a decision like capital punishment is quite justified.



BODY PARAGRAPH - 2

Exactly, the decision of capital punishment is inspired by the approach of leaving fear in the minds of people about law and order. Up to a certain extent, it is obviously right to behave like this for the uneducated and unaware natives of a country to maintain their safety and security level.

BODY PARAGRAPH - 3

There is another possible approach for controlling violence in the society and that is sending the criminals in a tough lifestyle where their mind could be washed and they can be turned up into meaningful approach however this requires a focused and well-planned action but impacts will be astounding and mass thinking touchable.

CONCLUSION

A country should go for capital punishment like the death penalty for severe crimes that powerfully contribute to disturbing the peace of the nation but it also has some alternative approach for improving the mindset of criminal by giving them a specific lifestyle for years under close monitoring so that they can be transformed into worthy citizens.


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