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IELTS WRITING ESSAY || MAY 2021 || SOLVED ESSAY NO - 93 || IELTSDK GLOBAL ||

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.



INTRODUCTION

Sports, which is a hobby for some became an accomplished skill for a professional. Various successful sports virtuoso earn a huge honorarium showcasing their agilities in tournaments such as WWF or FIFA, Which is far hiked than any other troop. Sports lovers are gratified with this but for others, this is highly peculiar. I believe remuneration should be based on adroitness rather than a profession.

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Primarily, sports maestro, namely Christian Ronaldo, Sania Mirza, Mary Kom have mastered their virtuosity and worshipped by their zealots. Every year, numerous tournaments, be it national or international, are organized and sports dexterous are reimbursed a huge load of money along with other rewards. Not just that several esteemed business outlets hire these crackerjacks for promoting their products in exchange for gargantuan money. Moreover, sports adept also open their own academics training new and younger sports personnel.



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But of course, some populace has a perception against sports executives getting a huge pan. As there are other vocations, which deserve many prodigious wages such as teachers, doctors, scientist, defence personnel and most honourable doctors. For instance, at the time of COVID-19, health competent worked and are still selflessly serving the nation without caring about their own health and social life. These superheroes deserve the highest salaries out of all professions.

CONCLUSION

Winding up the facets, I believe remuneration is not concomitant with métier but with versatility. The more flared you are the more you will get an honorarium. Hence, sports professionals getting high salaries are justified but other important vocational must also be paid a fair amount which they deserve.

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