The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency; arise from the fact that many married women now work and not at home to care for their children.
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The position of women in society has
changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now
experience, such as juvenile delinquency; arise from the fact that many married
women now work and not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
with the opinion?
One cannot deny from the truth that position
of women has transformed totally in the society and it is bringing certain
positives and negatives. When we put light on the negatives then things like
lost childhood of family kids and involvement of family kids in unproductive
and society harmful things, primarily come into the mind. Somewhere the culture
that women empowerment and active involvement of females has brought a
meaningless attitude of family kids for society.
It is of huge worth to
have a mother at home specially to guide and to nurture the kids in a
meaningful way. Somewhere, when kids do not get love and attention from their
own family they start thinking about means of getting attention and certainly
love from outside. Feelings of such kinds do not come in a day, it takes years
to make kids ready to commit such socially harmful stuff and making them
available for youngsters crimes and bad things.
Mainly the thing
responsible for such behavior of adults is lack of unconditional love from
their own family and role of mother in imparting devoted love to her kids is
primary. When a kid gets respect and love from his mother, he automatically
understands the meaning of life. He grows up with such feelings like I should
do something good for others and I should do some creative things for my
country but when these things are absent from his upbringing, he naturally
incline himself to violence and addictions.
There is a mandatory
need of mothers love in the life of children to make them aware about powerful
feelings like respect for others life, spreading love in the society and
respect for others safety and security.
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