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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. writing task 2 powerful demo

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Competition is really a powerful tool to inspire children to grow more and evolve more in all walks of life. Sense of competition instils a powerful and positive spirit to learn more things in children. Of course, if competition is healthy, productive and leaning focused then it is of high value. Sometimes, children go beyond their regular limits in various areas of their lives just because of other successful examples of that area.
As far as competition is providing ability, learning, skills, confidence, depth and maturity, it is really of great value. Sometimes, it is seen because of unnecessary competition, children do damage their neutrality and creativity.
Every child is unique and full of infinite unknown or unexplored talents. It is not good to throw him in the fire of competition without analysing the possible consequences of the same.    
Another perspective for children is, installing a sense of cooperation in them. To live in a peaceful and continuous growth oriented world, it is of huge importance that children in the school age must learn how to share and how to make a healthy cooperation based deal to others. It is a powerful feeling that is life transforming. As in society, we all are interdependent so it is urgent to understand mutual feeling and provide adequate support.  
This is of quite significant use to have a young nation of mutually respect based spirit with a great attitude of mutual cooperation. In a nutshell, competition is essential to grow and to expand as far as it is healthy, productive, learning based and positive. Along with this, creating adults with an attitude of mutual cooperation is equally fruitful.      
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