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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Very true it is, like when a child works, he sees the world in a different and responsible way. Doing work installs certain meaningful human values in children. Both aspects are associated with the concept of children paid working.
The first perspective is about the positives of this situation. Likewise, children become more open, creative, worthy, dutiful, disciplined, cultured, responsible and contributing towards the society. They get to know about how to survive and how to grow in the world. They make themselves self-dependent. They buy freedom when they work with earning money and earning experience opportunities. They learn the language of real world. They learn the power of efforts, the power of consistent growth and the power of gradual learning in long term evolution.
Somewhere, this culture also inspires children to become more open and interactive with the outside world in quite young age. They start thinking in mature manner for the world and for their role in the world.
Yes, there is also a second road to this situation and this is about making the children matured people quite early and losing their childhood joys and colors. Education becomes very rare for a child if he has deeply immersed in earning atmosphere and later, he might end up into a low paying job lifetime. Stress is also more in children who work and study at same time. Natural lifestyle is quite rare for such children and somewhere it disturbs their progress as a worthy and asset-like person at later stage.
Situation is having both aspects still the one with paid work that provides an essential life skill quite early is more attractive.                 
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