In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
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In many
countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard
this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience,
important for learning and taking responsibility.
To what extent
do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Very true it is, like
when a child works, he sees the world in a different and responsible way. Doing
work installs certain meaningful human values in children. Both aspects are
associated with the concept of children paid working.
The first perspective
is about the positives of this situation. Likewise, children become more open,
creative, worthy, dutiful, disciplined, cultured, responsible and contributing
towards the society. They get to know about how to survive and how to grow in the
world. They make themselves self-dependent. They buy freedom when they work
with earning money and earning experience opportunities. They learn the
language of real world. They learn the power of efforts, the power of
consistent growth and the power of gradual learning in long term evolution.
Somewhere, this culture
also inspires children to become more open and interactive with the outside
world in quite young age. They start thinking in mature manner for the world
and for their role in the world.
Yes, there is also a
second road to this situation and this is about making the children matured
people quite early and losing their childhood joys and colors. Education
becomes very rare for a child if he has deeply immersed in earning atmosphere
and later, he might end up into a low paying job lifetime. Stress is also more
in children who work and study at same time. Natural lifestyle is quite rare
for such children and somewhere it disturbs their progress as a worthy and
asset-like person at later stage.
Situation is having
both aspects still the one with paid work that provides an essential life skill
quite early is more attractive.
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