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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED ESSAY ON TOPIC: TRADITIONAL SKILLS IF DIE SHOULD WE PROTECT THEM?


IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE 

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.  
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Introduction (general fact + paraphrasing + thesis statement)

It is quite obvious that for the arrival of new old has to go. There is no bad lie in this as human beings are continuously evolving themselves. To make progress, one has to redefine the things in non-stop manner. It is certainly true that when a country plans out to grow in the field of its basic infrastructure and facilities with the help of technology then simply it has to empty itself from old ways of doing same things. Coming paragraphs will be revealing my exact point of views with both grounds.  

Body para 1

The main thing is, whether this evolution costs much or less, it is quite compulsory to move ahead. As far as, progress is making life effective and complete, it is totally acceptable and adaptable. With passage of time and population boom, somewhere, it has become necessary to update our systems of doing things. People are now looking at fast ways of getting facilities and they are not in a mood to wait even for routine things of life. To cope up the needs of people, a huge emergence of newness in technology requires.

Body para 2

At present times, systems of providing basic facilities has become so fast and accurate and somewhere they are serving masses properly as well. Yes, the concept of dying traditional ways is also of worth because somewhere old ways give us the ideas for reinventing the things. And also, one must respect the oldness to celebrate and explore the endless possibilities that lie in the new.

Conclusion

(Main conclusion) To keep the old ways alive is completely needless but taking constant ideas from traditional theories to innovate the system is quite imperative. (Restating opinion) One should appreciate the old to reinvent it in order to get the new out of the old constantly.      

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