IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
When a country develops its technology, the traditional
skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?
Introduction (general fact + paraphrasing +
thesis statement)
It is quite obvious that
for the arrival of new old has to go. There is no bad lie in this as
human beings are continuously evolving themselves. To make progress,
one has to redefine the things in non-stop manner. It is certainly true
that when a country plans out to grow in the field of its basic
infrastructure and facilities with the help of technology then simply it
has to empty itself from old ways of doing same things. Coming
paragraphs will be revealing my exact point of views with both grounds.
Body para 1
The main thing is,
whether this evolution costs much or less, it is quite compulsory
to move ahead. As far as, progress is making life effective and complete,
it is totally acceptable and adaptable. With passage of time and
population boom, somewhere, it has become necessary to update our systems
of doing things. People are now looking at fast ways of getting facilities
and they are not in a mood to wait even for routine things of life. To
cope up the needs of people, a huge emergence of newness in
technology requires.
Body para 2
At present times,
systems of providing basic facilities has become so fast and accurate and
somewhere they are serving masses properly as well. Yes, the concept
of dying traditional ways is also of worth because somewhere old ways
give us the ideas for reinventing the things. And also, one must respect
the oldness to celebrate and explore the endless possibilities
that lie in the new.
Conclusion
(Main conclusion) To
keep the old ways alive is completely needless but taking constant
ideas from traditional theories to innovate the system is quite
imperative. (Restating opinion) One should appreciate the old to
reinvent it in order to get the new out of the old constantly.
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