IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
“Prevention
is better than cure.”
Out of a country’s health budget, a large
proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education
and preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with
the statement?
Introduction
A sound health reveals a well-educated and
worthy portrait of a person. Out of all precious blessings of life,
health is the primary one. One must not overlook his health. When we
call health is important obviously we point / figure out certain
lifestyle ways and eating habits that matters most in maintaining a
strong and active body. In coming paragraphs, with absolute clarity I will
touch the all possible aspects.
Body para 1
Certainly, I agree on the
concept of proactiveness. One should be proactive in his approach.
One should be crystal clear in is mind that he is going to live in such
a manner that gifts him a fitness based and active lifestyle. Like
actors, celebrities, politicians and white-color officials normally live in
their real lives.
Body para 2
One more thing is there
that every disease lies in the way we live our daily routine. Likewise,
what we eat, how we eat, how much we eat, how many times we eat, the quality of
food that we take, the level of work we do, the primary purpose of our
life, the work schedule that we follow and naturally, the self-image
of ours about ourselves, are the responsible factors that affect a
person’s health. When one goes out of shape in his fitness then he
looks like a handicap but when he has a choice to do or not to do
the things that adversely affect him, he must show a proactive
approach.
Conclusion
A country should consciously invest
substantial money on expanding health
awareness and elevating
the native’s mindset towards the healthy lifestyle because by
doing so, a country can save billions and those billions can be
productively invested into other meaningful areas for an exponential
growth of that nation.
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