IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED ESSAY ON TOPIC: SHOULD ARTISTS SHOULD BE FREE OR RESTRICTED IN THEIR FIELD?

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE 

Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Introduction

Artists are the living angels on earth. It is so true, artists communicate feelings of masses with love, creativity and respectfully. (General fact) Every artist serves his art by actively pursuing it with passion, dedication, respect and sense of unconditional devotion. Few say artist should be given full power to express their originality while some are disagree to this. (Paraphrasing) As far as the question of giving freedom is concerned, I will analyze the situation with deep observation in coming set of paragraphs. (Thesis statement)   

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A free hand for artists is must. As the artist is part of society, they should be fly like open birds in the sky of their creative fields. With freedom, creativity explodes. With personal liberty of expression, an artist put his ultimate art in his work. True artists are true because they always keep this in mind that they are servers of their art as well as servers of mankind. They perform to love, to open the minds, to respect mankind and to salute the great god who has gifted them with immense talent.

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Limitless attitude of government for artists is also important because artists present a real picture of the society. They help us in finding where the improvement is required or exactly where we stand currently. Once artists feel like they are free to express themselves, they create masterpieces. One more thing is artists contribute meaningfully in the evolution of mankind.

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Yes, it is also necessary to define certain limits on expression of artists. As far as, the matters of vulgarity, senseless presentation and emotional disrespect are concerned; creative artist should be under check for their works. Artists on their own should feel responsible and strong part of society in establishing a culture of mutual respect and humility.

Conclusion

Artists are the creative angels of god and they are must for creative flow of culture and loving vibrations. (Conclusion) Freedom must be gifted to them to reflect their inner creative genius out in the world. (Suggestion or future hope)