IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
Improvements in health, education and trade
are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments
of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer
nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Introduction
To develop any nation, it is quite essential to
strengthen its basic body’s like health, education, technology and trade.
(General fact) Standing firmly in case of a nation requires a lot
effort on basics. If a country is due to any reason is unable to focus
on these fronts then its disaster is guaranteed. Now the question
of help comes, few opine government of wealthy nations should come
forward. (Paraphrasing) I will clearly explicate the whole situation in
coming paragraphs. (Thesis statement)
Body para 1
Certainly, governments of developed nations should come
forward to establish a strong fundamental development model in needy
countries. Of course, there are platforms globally which are making
things better for poorer countries every day. The thing is clear that if
wealthy countries focus more on making needy countries strong then an
atmosphere of peace, mutual respect, global growth and strong sense of one
world can be established.
Body para 2
Policies of developed countries can be
adopted within the close monitoring of their officials to
empower the economy of a poor country. Somewhere, the basic purpose of
globalization is same likewise countries will make each other strong and take
full advantage of each other’s expertise. There are resources available in
poorer countries, those are waiting for people of developed countries to make
them globally useful and expecting to get powerful returns for their
countries.
Conclusion
Sharing is always better and wealthy countries are better
in many ways and surely, they must undertake the responsibility of paving the
way for needy nations and they should do this with integrity, with a
sense of cooperation and with the vision of global growth.
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