IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED ESSAY ON TOPIC: DEVELOPMENT OF POOR COUNTRIES, HOW IT CAN BE DONE?

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE 

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Introduction

To develop any nation, it is quite essential to strengthen its basic body’s like health, education, technology and trade. (General fact) Standing firmly in case of a nation requires a lot effort on basics. If a country is due to any reason is unable to focus on these fronts then its disaster is guaranteed. Now the question of help comes, few opine government of wealthy nations should come forward. (Paraphrasing) I will clearly explicate the whole situation in coming paragraphs. (Thesis statement)  

Body para 1

Certainly, governments of developed nations should come forward to establish a strong fundamental development model in needy countries. Of course, there are platforms globally which are making things better for poorer countries every day. The thing is clear that if wealthy countries focus more on making needy countries strong then an atmosphere of peace, mutual respect, global growth and strong sense of one world can be established.

Body para 2

Policies of developed countries can be adopted within the close monitoring of their officials to empower the economy of a poor country. Somewhere, the basic purpose of globalization is same likewise countries will make each other strong and take full advantage of each other’s expertise. There are resources available in poorer countries, those are waiting for people of developed countries to make them globally useful and expecting to get powerful returns for their countries.  

Conclusion

Sharing is always better and wealthy countries are better in many ways and surely, they must undertake the responsibility of paving the way for needy nations and they should do this with integrity, with a sense of cooperation and with the vision of global growth.