IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of
paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider
it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking
responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?
Introduction
Very true it is, like when a child works, he
sees the world in a different and responsible way.
Doing work installs certain meaningful human values in children. Matter
of paid working for children has always been a matter of debate and
views are there in favor or against of it. In the coming stanzas,
I will clearly explicate the both grounds before presenting any concrete
final saying.
Body para 1
The first perspective / the first and
foremost point / the fresh opinion on this matter is
about the positives of this situation. Likewise, children become more
open, creative, worthy, dutiful, disciplined, cultured, responsible and
contributing towards the society. They get to know about how to survive
and how to grow in the world. They make themselves self-dependent.
They buy freedom when they work with earning money and earning
experience opportunities. They learn the language of real world. They
learn the power of efforts, the power of consistent growth and
the power of gradual learning in long term evolution.
Body para 2
Somewhere, this culture also inspires children to
become more open and interactive with the outside world in quite young age.
They start thinking in mature manner for the world and for their role
in the world.
Body para 3
(Disagree) Yes, there is also a second road
to this situation / opposite view to the above said situation is also there and
this is about making the children matured people quite early and losing
their childhood joys and colors. Education becomes very rare for a child
if he has deeply immersed in earning atmosphere and later, he might end
up into a low paying job lifetime. Stress is also more in
children who work and study at same time. Natural lifestyle is quite rare
for such children and somewhere it disturbs their progress as a worthy
and asset-like person at later stage.
Conclusion
Situation is having both aspects with solid grounds
still the one with paid work that provides an essential life skill
quite early is more attractive. Children should be fostered to go for
such healthy, productive and incredible work experiences.
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