IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
In many countries schools have severe
problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the main causes of
this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any
relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Introduction
How true it is, we get respect with direct proportion
of our behavior to others. When students behave in a rude way or in an
irresponsible way then of course it is hard to deal the same for the school
authorities. Once we go in introspection of the causes of such temperament
of students towards school management then particularly attitude of today’s
student comes in to lime light. Several others things are there, I will
open the whole matter before reaching to a concrete conclusion in coming
stanzas.
Body para 1
Attitude of a student is formed by
various things like his family background, mutual respect of his family for
him, his self-image, his personal targets in life, teacher’s attitude towards
him and his active participation in studies. By taking into account all
these primary factors, the picture goes clear about the current
disposition of students into school premises.
Body para 2
We live in a world of cause and effect, students
are not solely responsible for this deviation in behavior, and a
dedicated approach from the side of family and school authorities is required
in this to make the things easy and on their place. Parents should take initiative
to spend time purposefully with their kids to understand them and to
encourage them towards a love based and peaceful life.
Body para 3
Teachers also play a vital role in life of
students in shaping their destinies and in helping them in
becoming a meaningful and asset like for their nation. Teachers should
come forward to foster a healthy self-esteem in students so that they
can start respecting themselves and should embark living a value based and
morally respectful life.
Conclusion
More than students themselves,
their families and teachers are quite responsible for taking them on a place
where they are right now. With collective responsibility they can make the
picture beautiful.
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