IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
The position of women in society has changed markedly in
the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such
as juvenile delinquency; arise from the fact that many married women now work
and not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with
the opinion?
Introduction
One cannot deny from the truth
that position of women has transformed totally in the society and it is bringing
certain positives and negatives. When we put light on the negatives
then things like lost childhood of family kids and involvement of family
kids in unproductive and society harmful things, primarily come into the
mind. Somewhere the culture that women empowerment and active
involvement of females has brought a meaningless attitude of family
kids for society.
Body para 1
It is of huge worth to have a
mother at home especially to guide and nurture the kids in a
meaningful way. Somewhere, when kids do not get love and attention from
their own family they start thinking about means of getting attention
and certainly love from outside. Feelings of such kinds do not come in a day, it
takes years to make kids ready to commit such socially harmful stuff and
making them available for youngsters crimes and bad things.
Body para 2
Mainly the thing responsible for such
behavior of adults is lack of unconditional love from
their own family and role of mother in imparting devoted love to her
kids is primary. When a kid gets respect and love from his mother, he
automatically understands the meaning of life. He grows up with such
feelings like I should do something good for others and I should do some
creative things for my country but when these things are absent from his
upbringing, he naturally inclines himself to violence and addictions.
Conclusion
There is a mandatory need of mothers love in the
life of children to make them aware about powerful feelings like respect
for others life, spreading love in the society and respect for others safety
and security. Mothers should also come forward to understand their primary
role towards their children.
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