IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
Popular events like football world cup and other
international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions
and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?
Introduction
It is quite imperative to consider the impact
which international sports events create / generate / produce among
participating countries. Concern / matter / point / aspect of role played by
popular events of sports in reducing / lightening / weakening the
tensions between countries is worth to consider. Both dimensions of
the aspect have solid grounds and I will put light in a clear manner
before reaching to some meaningful conclusion.
Body para 1
(Main idea 1)
Closeness between people of
two countries breeds emotional understanding of each other’s true
feelings. Furthermore, once they start interacting or meeting to each other
on such events, naturally, they will tend to realize that there
is nothing in between them which is hostile apart from utter
misunderstandings.
(Supporting idea 1)
Certainly,
the atmosphere such events generate, is beyond any national boundaries and
religious limits. Sometimes, it happens that people start appreciating
other countries just because of their sportsmen and their sports spirit.
Even, it is noticed almost in every game that in the winning moments,
everyone watches the game by completely associating themselves with the true
spirit of victory and defeat.
(Supporting idea 2)
Because
of their forming histories and political reasons, there are always
tensions going on in between many countries and it becomes essential in such
environment that there should be some platform where people can
interact and know each other. (Supporting idea 3) Because the common man
of any country does not keep any ill feeling for the common man of other
country. It is media and political people who look the situation in
other ways and fill the minds of common man with worry and insecurity.
Within such climate, sports and international events are a panacea to ease
the tensions.
Conclusion
(Main conclusion)
Meaningful and huge importance goes to popular events in lightening the
tensions and heavy emotions that people worldwide carry for other / neighboring
countries. (Restating opinion) Countries should come forward to increase
the frequency of such emotionally-healer kind of events worldwide.
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