IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED ESSAY ON TOPIC : ROLE OF SPORTS IN WORLD PEACE!

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE 

Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Introduction

It is quite imperative to consider the impact which international sports events create / generate / produce among participating countries. Concern / matter / point / aspect of role played by popular events of sports in reducing / lightening / weakening the tensions between countries is worth to consider. Both dimensions of the aspect have solid grounds and I will put light in a clear manner before reaching to some meaningful conclusion.   

Body para 1

(Main idea 1) 

Closeness between people of two countries breeds emotional understanding of each other’s true feelings. Furthermore, once they start interacting or meeting to each other on such events, naturally, they will tend to realize that there is nothing in between them which is hostile apart from utter misunderstandings.

(Supporting idea 1) 

Certainly, the atmosphere such events generate, is beyond any national boundaries and religious limits. Sometimes, it happens that people start appreciating other countries just because of their sportsmen and their sports spirit. Even, it is noticed almost in every game that in the winning moments, everyone watches the game by completely associating themselves with the true spirit of victory and defeat.

(Supporting idea 2) 

Because of their forming histories and political reasons, there are always tensions going on in between many countries and it becomes essential in such environment that there should be some platform where people can interact and know each other. (Supporting idea 3) Because the common man of any country does not keep any ill feeling for the common man of other country. It is media and political people who look the situation in other ways and fill the minds of common man with worry and insecurity. Within such climate, sports and international events are a panacea to ease the tensions.              

Conclusion

(Main conclusion) Meaningful and huge importance goes to popular events in lightening the tensions and heavy emotions that people worldwide carry for other / neighboring countries. (Restating opinion) Countries should come forward to increase the frequency of such emotionally-healer kind of events worldwide.