IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED ESSAY ON TOPIC: ROLE OF FATHER / MOTHER IN RAISING CHILDREN!

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE 

 “Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.”

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

Introduction

Father has his unique role while mother has her own vital role in the meaningful upbringing of a child. Both parties have responsibility to give their child an exciting perspective towards life as he grows up. Somewhere, the huge responsibility is always played by the mother while father is considered the main earning hand of the family and because of this, he is kept away from the minute responsibilities of children nurturing. In coming stuff, clearly I will put light on both views.

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There are several factors that decide like whether the key role will be played by the mother or the father. In a family, its earning power, educational background, openness to new cultures, and mutual coordination among each other, family legacy and size of the family are very much responsible in telling that whether the father will be the vital or the mother will be the caption.          

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Males and females both have their perception levels regarding how life works and how things contribute in life at different stages and they both are totally capable in giving their child new and meaningful eyes. Mothers give birth to babies and do all necessary physical sacrifices for their children just to ensure a smooth arrival of baby in the world. Mothers do grand contribution in the birth of a child but it never means that they are solely responsible for all decisions regarding the future of the child. It will be quite meaningful if mothers and fathers create a significant balance in the upbringing activity.

Conclusion

It is like mutual cooperation situation as they both are in the game of family evolution and they both can play amazingly great if they respect each other’s role with genuine concern. Here, fathers are required to take the main stage in this whole process so that mothers can be helped significantly in all this.