IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SOLVED EXAMPLE
“Fatherhood
ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely
responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea
that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with
the opinion?
Introduction
Father has his unique role while mother has
her own vital role in the meaningful upbringing of a child.
Both parties have responsibility to give their child an exciting perspective
towards life as he grows up. Somewhere, the huge responsibility
is always played by the mother while father is considered the main earning
hand of the family and because of this, he is kept away from the minute
responsibilities of children nurturing. In coming stuff, clearly I will
put light on both views.
Body para 1
There are several factors that decide like whether
the key role will be played by the mother or the father. In a family, its
earning power, educational background, openness to new cultures,
and mutual coordination among each other, family legacy and size of the family
are very much responsible in telling that whether the father will be the
vital or the mother will be the caption.
Body para 2
Males and females both have their perception levels
regarding how life works and how things contribute in life at different
stages and they both are totally capable in giving their child new and
meaningful eyes. Mothers give birth to babies and do all necessary physical
sacrifices for their children just to ensure a smooth arrival of baby in the
world. Mothers do grand contribution in the birth of a child but it
never means that they are solely responsible for all decisions regarding
the future of the child. It will be quite meaningful if mothers and
fathers create a significant balance in the upbringing activity.
Conclusion
It is like mutual cooperation situation as they
both are in the game of family evolution and they both can play amazingly
great if they respect each other’s role with genuine concern. Here, fathers
are required to take the main stage in this whole process so that mothers
can be helped significantly in all this.
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